Oh wow. That is INCREDIBLE!!! The imagery is flawless, and I very much can feel what you mean. I love so many of these lines, might I share this with a few friends?
I'm kind of a snob when it comes to poetry, I have to admit. I've read a LOT because I've been writing for SO long. (I started writing when I was 11, and eventually I got better. It was pretty bad in the beginning.) So when I wax on about something, I hope you know that I'm really just wowed.
So good, Uw. Just perfect.