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10-21-2008, 09:20 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
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My Mood:  Points: 2,202.31 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 2,202.31 |  First poem...Appearance.
This is my first poem in a while...I suppose hormones had something to do with this.
Appearances
Weight weight weight
About to break!
The scale, my enemy,
feeling horrendously.
Hair Hair Hair
It grows everywhere!
About to break,
a simple mistake.
Pain Pain Pain
A horrible migrane!
If only it would end,
my everlasting pain.
Tears tears tears
They won't believe
my terrible tale
and horrible ordeal.
Esteem Esteem Esteem
Lower than the floor,
I cannot bear children,
and no one hears my silent scream.
Life Life Life
seems like a hardship
when you live this way
isn't there an end?
Accept Accept Accept
I may be inept
at some things
but I will try
for there is
no one else
like
me.
Uhm, I hope that wasn't too bad...let me know what you think of it, please~ | 
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10-25-2008, 03:40 PM
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this is a very good poem goodjob | |
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10-31-2008, 11:48 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Cherry Point, North Carolina[.:::.]
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I think this is great, and I started to cry reading it because I feel for you very much. Thank you for sharing.
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11-13-2008, 08:28 AM
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Nice! I can relate!!!
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11-16-2008, 04:07 PM
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That was a great poem, and I think most of us on here can definitely relate | |
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11-30-2008, 02:17 AM
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Thanks for sharing | |
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12-21-2008, 09:26 PM
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I liked it, I would like to see more!~ | |
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12-26-2008, 05:26 AM
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nice one! | |
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