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Letter to our "Illness." Maybe today will be the day, That you will have gone away, Maybe today is the day, I for once have my own way, We always argue, You never lose, You leave my hopes covered, With a great black bruise, Sometimes I feel content, Sometimes I feel sad, But I never feel beautiful, You never understand, You are in my way, Every day, Like a sea of dark poison, Like a cold wall of clay. You never look once, To say goodbye, You stay all the time, Why else would I cry, You take all normality, You leave me with none, If only you'd see me, You'd find what you've done, Yet you sit there and stay, And surround me with doubt, Self hatred and shame, Please go just GET OUT.
#2 permalink Czara
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This is great... it brought a little tear to my eye too...
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... so very true... its beautiful
#4 permalink Bride-To-Be
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Quote:
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czara This is great... it brought a little tear to my eye too...
It brought a tear to my eyes too.
Beautiful!
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aww, how beautiful. Thanks for sharing
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#6 permalink im soo in love
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i like that it gave me the chills
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thank you for sharing very well done
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#8 permalink Honorary SoulCyster
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I can as most of us probably can too relate to this so much!
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beautiful poem. and true
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that's really strong.. i like it
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Letter to our "Illness." 
