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Old 06-01-2007, 04:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I just finished another short story, litterally at about 2a.m. lol. And I was wondering if there's anyone on here that would be willing to kind of edit it for me. I really just need to make sure that it all flows together. I'm very shy when it comes to my writing, I still don't know why, I guess just because it comes from within me? So I want someone that's not going to be overly harsh (I know I know I ask a lot don't I?? lol) Anyways if anyone's interested let me know. It's going to take me until at least tonight to get it typed up completely. Anyway- thanks in advance!
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Old 06-01-2007, 11:41 PM   #3 (permalink)
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THanks Amy!! It will probably be at least tomorrow before I can send it...I got sidetracked today and didn't get it typed up lol. I appreciate it though! Thanks again!
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