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    Default It's a poem... For those who lost little ones

    I hope this doesn't make you sad or offended in anyway, it just came out of me after reading a post in the loss forum.



    Little baby girl,
    Do you have wings?
    To fly all round the world
    To see all sparkling things.

    Like every princess should...


    Little baby boy,
    Are those really wings?
    You should stay, precious boy
    To see what the future brings

    Like every hero should...


    My little angel, sweetest baby,
    I think of what ifs and maybe
    But it all feels so wrong,
    And I know I'll long for so long...

    So peacefully, asleep in the crib,
    Would fit so perfectly on my arm,
    Sweetest baby, made from my rib,
    Just a photograph to keep me warm...

    Not a laughing child, you see
    Just the smallest coffin I have ever seen
    Not a bruised knee to kiss for me,
    Just the saddest place I've ever been...




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    That was beautiful. thank you for sharing!

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    That's so pretty and touching. Thank you!!!
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    That was Buetiful! It brought tears to my eyes. Thanks for writing that I am sure that alot of the cysters will enjoy it! May God Bless You!

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    Evenstar, that is really deep! Great poem! Do you write them often?
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    BEAUTIFUL! Thank you for sharing.

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    I am crying......... That was so amazing. My 4 year old little boy came in why i was crying and wiped my tears. He asked why I was crying and I read him the poem. He asked if the little boy with wings can come play with him. I thought it was so sweet, thanks for sharing.

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    You're all welcome Thank you SO MUCH for the feedback!
    Happy someone liked it.

    *wonders if she should post more poems*
    22 years old. Dx 2005. Off Diane bcp. Trying this low carb thing... And, it worked. But then I wanted chocolate.
    "And I know, my church is not of silver and gold.
    Its glory lies beyond judgment of souls."
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    English is NOT my first language. Please bear with me.

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    evenstar...YES!
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    yes, that was really good....thnx for sharing
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    please do, that was beautiful....
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    That was so beautiful!! Thank you for sharing!!
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